Why use deep third person limited POV?
Because you can insert internal thoughts from the point-of-view character so the reader can get to know them better. In deep third, you don’t have to put her/his thoughts in first person and italicize them.
I like doing this because it allows me to get deeper inside my character’s head, showing more to the reader. You can bring emotion out in your character using deep third.
Author Ann Laurel Kopchick says, because a first person narrator/character knows that they’re telling a story to the reader. When you’re deep in limited third person, that character/narrator is unaware they are telling a story. The reader is reading the unfiltered thoughts, emotions, and feelings of that character.
Here’s an example of Deep POV from ‘Acting Married’ by Victorine E. Lieske:
She set the tray down on the server against the wall. Super. She’d messed up again. If her training had drilled anything into her head, it was that she was supposed to be invisible and never speak unless spoken to. Why couldn’t she do a simple job? She needed to give them the coffee and get out of there.
- Don’t just report thoughts and feelings, descend into the character
- Thoughts and perceptions should be that of the character
- Use terminology, phrasing, syntax, grammar that the character uses
- Avoid Filtering
Example with filtering: She saw the car swerve off the road and head straight for her. She dodged away. “God,” she thought, “I could have been killed!”
Example without filtering: In a hail of gravel, the car careered off the road and bore down. She threw herself to one side as hot air and metal whooshed passed. God, she could have been killed!
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